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Variation on a Sparrow Haiku

September 5, 2016 by Rob Gourley Leave a Comment

Carolina_Wren_2

A Wren briefly wears

the windblown red-leaf cloak,

then darts free into flight.

 

Late in his career Jack Kerouac participated in an interview for The Paris Review. Ted Berrigan had initiated the interview and brought wine and two associates along. As the evening proceeded, Kerouac and Berrigan developed a haiku concerning a sparrow under an autumn leaf.

Kerouac was responding to the interviewer’s question, “You have said that haiku is not written spontaneously but is re-worked and revised. Is this true of all your poetry?” Kerouac chose to respond with this creative exercise, quite possibly to demonstrate the interplay between the spontaneous moment observing the sparrow and the subsequent trial-and-error distillation needed to approximate the inspirational moment in verbal expression as a haiku.

My wren haiku above is a variation on Kerouac-Berrigan’s collaborative effort. Kerouac wrote the sparrow haiku into his notebook during the evening. The entire interview appeared in print (1968) and is now available digitally, http://theparisreview.org/interviews/4260/the-art-of-fiction-no-41-jack-kerouac .

Filed Under: Nature, Poetry, ULE Tagged With: Jack Kerouac, Ted Berrigan

About Rob Gourley

Rob Gourley's verse has appeared in DEGU A Journal of Signs, Elohi Gadugi Journal, Ghost Town Poetry, Shot Glass Journal, Sunset Times, and Upper Left Edge. He lives in a family of four in Aberdeen, WA -- observing wildlife & and growing a garden. Pre-pandemic he enjoyed dropping by open-mic events, Olympia to Astoria & Portland, for the stimulation of others and auditing new pieces he had been refining, but that's been several years ago now.

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